Sunday, July 29, 2007

Class 102 wrap-up *finally*

Here goes attempt number three million. My new approach as I’m learning that the Army doesn’t want us writing blogs and reading them on their computers, is to do this all in Word and then transfer to Blogger which should save me some time and not risk losing all that I do because of a bad connection. Let’s have at it then.

Stu pose from Class 102 and Dana’s critique. For starters she didn’t feel the second pose worked that well and once she began talking about unclearly it read and it’s awkwardness I understood. As for the initial pose itself here’s what she had to say.
The lower hand has, what became Dana’s phrase for the week, the “lobster claw” going. It also is creating a stress point with that other knee. Both hands also appear to be ‘twinning’ one another, looking to similar which means they both are sporting the “lobster claw,” something other AM students pointed out in their comments. Also Stu’s right knee, the one on the left, Dana felt could be turned out more so that it didn’t look so flat. While she didn’t feel that the pose let people no what Stu is doing, she did like the line of action and his clear silhouette.

There you have it. Far shorter than what my original rant was but done.

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